Michaeline: David Bowie and Motif (also: Artistic Licenses)

Persian carpet with various repeating motifs, such as horses and stars in square forms. It's tattered on the edges, and very, very old. Reminds me of the line from the Bowie/Queen song, Under Pressure. Keep coming up with love but it's so slashed and torn.

Motifs add interest and rhythm to a work of art, and subtly point out what the important themes are. (Image via Wikimedia Commons)

David Bowie knew a lot about motif. It’s one of the things that made him a great musician, and it also made him an excellent comedian. He knew the power of the call-back, the reminder of what went before.

I’ve found two clips of him with US late night show host Conan O’Brien. (“David Bowie – Late Night with Conan O’Brien 18 June 2002” [anecdote starts about 3:10]) We start out with a very charming story of how his baby daughter discovered the moon for the first time. He repeats the word “moon,” and he says it in different voices as the context changes. And then he starts talking about something else, but Conan brings it back to the moon, and David catches the ball and joins in, like a sort of harmony. At one point, they are both pointing at the stage ceiling, howling, “Moon! Moon!”

Many people claimed that David Bowie didn’t repeat himself, but he did. He was just smart enough to change the dynamics. It didn’t get boring because he did it louder, he did it softer, he surrounded the motif with new information, and made it bigger or made it smaller.

I’m not sure if motif works very well if it’s chosen ahead of time. But I do think we write something, then we write some more, and something reminds of us of a past phrase, and we repeat it, or echo it, and create a doppelganger. We write some more, and repeat it again. There’s something that resonates in our writing soul. We can recognize that repetition, and reinforce it in the later drafts, but I’m not sure if it really works if we say, “I’m going to put a dahlia in each and every scene,” or choose our motifs then build our work. I think we have to see the motifs in a body of work, then strengthen them. We wind up with an army of doppelgangers, subtly pointing out what’s really important about the work.

My second clip (“Conan Remembers David Bowie – CONAN on TBS” [anecdote starts at 2:54]) shows that sometimes fate just steps in and provides a motif for us. The two hams chew the scenery a bit in this sketch. Conan puts David on the spot by asking him to sing a bad song Conan has composed. “It’s in G. You like G, huh?” Conan asks ingratiatingly, strumming his guitar. David replies wearily, “I love G.” He shoots Conan the evil eye. “I live for G.” David barely puts up with singing the horrible lyrics until he gets to the point where Conan steals the lyrics from Space Oddity, and he’s had it. “How about – “ he begins angrily when one of Conan’s strings break. David breaks character, and laughs. “You’ve bust your G-string.” Never mind that it was really the E string (I think). Artistic license. The motif brings things naturally around to the key of G.

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4 thoughts on “Michaeline: David Bowie and Motif (also: Artistic Licenses)

  1. I’ll have to check out those clips when I am on a computer with working speakers.

    I like the idea of motif – it was really interesting when we delved into it at McDaniel. That said, it isn’t something I really think about until the second pass through a story, when inadvertent repeated elements are noticeable. I wonder if trying to intentionally build motifs in the initial draft of the story would be effective or would just get in the way of the Girls.

    • Yeah, I am inclined to think that motif starts to happen when you aren’t really quite looking to do it. Unless, of course, that’s the whole story seed. I could see that. It’s never happened to me, but I could see it happening.

  2. I’ve been enjoying your posts on David Bowie and Prince. As a fellow child (young adult) of the 80s, it’s been a tough year so far regarding the icons of our era. Thanks for finding and sharing such great clips!

    • Oh, I’m glad. I’ve seen so many comments on YouTube about how “this must have been how my (parent) felt when Elvis died.” Or throwing back to “this was the day the music died.”

      I feel like I’m being too obsessive about the whole thing . . . but then again, the Girls are intensively interested, and I don’t think I can ignore that. Bowie told some great stories . . . .

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