Fiction Fundamentals: How to be a Hooker (Writing Great Intros)

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It’s our pleasure to welcome soon-t0-be-published author Jenn Windrow to Eight Ladies Writing. To continue Justine’s series on Fiction Fundamentals, Jenn is going to talk about writing great intros. Take it away, Jenn!

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The single most important part to any book, in my opinion, is the first few paragraphs.

Why?

Because this is where you “hook” your reader. And you want nothing more than to hook your reader from the very first sentence.

Think about it, a well written first paragraph should do many things. It should tell your reader what the story is about. Set the tone. Introduce your character. Introduce your world.

I could sit here all day and tell you what you need to include in your fist paragraph, but I think it’s easier to analyze some amazing examples. So, let’s dig in. Continue reading

Justine: “Just Bleed” by Jenn Windrow

bleeding heartMy very good friend and critique partner, Jenn Windrow, writes paranormal and urban fantasy and just inked an eight-book deal with Muse It Up Publishing (woo-hoo!). She’s a multi-award winner, a 3-time Margie Lawson Immersion grad, and a fantastic writer. I am super-fortunate to work with her!

She penned this post “Just Bleed” on her own group site, Readerlicious: For Writers Who Love Readers. I love it for how it describes us writers and Continue reading

Justine: Community

eight ladies writing, justine covington, community, writing, writerThe concept of community is something very important in books, IMHO. When you fall in love with a character, invariably you fall in love with the other characters that make up their community and often, the community comes together to help the hero or heroine achieve their goal.

The same is true in the writing community. For a few weeks now, I’ve been thinking about how to revise my first scene. The way it is (as evidenced by my five-week evolution here) is okay, but it sets me up with a big problem, namely we don’t see Susannah and Nate together until the fourth scene — WAAAAAY too long for the two of them to meet. Plus, by setting up the first scene as it was, we don’t get a sense of Susannah’s community (which is limited at first to her friend Maggie). Again, we have to wait until the fourth scene to discover Susannah’s friend. Continue reading