Fiction Fundamentals: How to be a Hooker (Writing Great Intros)

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It’s our pleasure to welcome soon-t0-be-published author Jenn Windrow to Eight Ladies Writing. To continue Justine’s series on Fiction Fundamentals, Jenn is going to talk about writing great intros. Take it away, Jenn!

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The single most important part to any book, in my opinion, is the first few paragraphs.

Why?

Because this is where you “hook” your reader. And you want nothing more than to hook your reader from the very first sentence.

Think about it, a well written first paragraph should do many things. It should tell your reader what the story is about. Set the tone. Introduce your character. Introduce your world.

I could sit here all day and tell you what you need to include in your fist paragraph, but I think it’s easier to analyze some amazing examples. So, let’s dig in. Continue reading

Guest Blogger Margie Lawson: Writing Stellar Smiles

smileRead a smile you’ve never read before? Could be awesome!

Read a smile you’ve read hundreds of times? Could be loathsome.

We all know those clichéd, overused, carry-no-interest smiles and grins.

Here are a few overused smiles and grins:

  • Half-smile
  • Weak smile
  • Broad smile
  • Silly smile
  • Ear-to-ear smile
  • Smile that didn’t reach eyes
  • Infectious grin
  • Impish grin
  • Fought a grin
  • Teasing grin
  • Wicked grin
  • Lopsided grin

Compare those to Continue reading

Justine: “Just Bleed” by Jenn Windrow

bleeding heartMy very good friend and critique partner, Jenn Windrow, writes paranormal and urban fantasy and just inked an eight-book deal with Muse It Up Publishing (woo-hoo!). She’s a multi-award winner, a 3-time Margie Lawson Immersion grad, and a fantastic writer. I am super-fortunate to work with her!

She penned this post “Just Bleed” on her own group site, Readerlicious: For Writers Who Love Readers. I love it for how it describes us writers and Continue reading