Jilly: Sunday Short Story–Claws and Effect

It’s a treat to be back in discovery mode, trying to get to some traction on a new story. I’m not there yet, but I think I’m getting close.

In an attempt to maintain my creative momentum, here’s a short story based on the prompts from Elizabeth’s Friday writing sprints, in which the main character makes an unfortunate discovery, and including the words collar, gum, confidence, assassination, flawless, pill, cardio, dart, strange, tiny, balance, coat, hollow, bayonet, affair and guidebook.

Claws and Effect

Xavier the Chemist was free. None of us could believe it.

The Agency boys and girls had played strictly by the rules. Permissions, documentation, evidence, charges, their work had been flawless. They’d built a watertight case against Xavier with painstaking care and they didn’t even get their day in court. A sleazy lawyer, a crooked politician, a few million in used notes, and the entire team was suspended without pay pending an official investigation.

Xavier’s PR firm had a field day, deploying a lethal combination of money and influence in a supremely confident no-holds-barred attempt to bayonet the wounded. He owned the front pages, news websites and social media, demanding an apology and nation-bankrupting damages. Questions were asked in the House.

The bastard was untouchable now. And that meant more good people would die.

Like hell they would. If arrest and imprisonment couldn’t keep us safe, it would have to be assassination.

For the Agency, the law was a straitjacket. For us it was more of a guidebook.

Tomorrow Xavier would disappear beyond our reach, escorted on to his private plane or his armored superyacht. Tonight he was within our grasp, sleeping off his exertions after a torrid twenty-four hour affair with an oligarch’s spoiled daughter.

I opened the door of our nondescript trailer and watched Shadow dart outside. The tiny wildcat shifter was my preferred partner and for her this was personal. Some of Xavier’s deadliest concoctions targeted the shifter community.

I adjusted my headset and took my seat in front of the video screen. If we were lucky, my job would be to watch, listen and chew gum until my jaws ached. If not…

The feed from the camera attached to Shadow’s collar tracked her progress as she used the special coating on her paws to climb the mansion wall. She hugged the slight hollow behind the drainpipe, where her dappled coat would make her almost invisible.

I chewed harder as she slithered through the barely-open bathroom window and paused to gather her balance. She slunk, silent as the grave, through to the master bedroom where Xavier sprawled, face-down, snoring loudly. His muscular body was a mess of love bites, rope burns, teeth marks and scratches. Perfect.

I stopped chewing, afraid to make the slightest noise as Shadow extended a claw, flicked it to release a micro-dose of one of Xavier’s own deadly concoctions, and drew it delicately down a long scratch at the top of his thigh.

She should have left immediately, but I couldn’t blame her for wanting to be sure. It didn’t take long.

His eyes opened wide. His mouth yawned as he gasped for air. He clawed at his chest, then scrabbled desperately in the drawer on his nightstand. He gulped a strange-looking multicolored pill, and then a handful of plain white ones. He should have known it was futile.

Cardio-something long and complicated, the coroner would conclude.

But we’d call it justice.

10 thoughts on “Jilly: Sunday Short Story–Claws and Effect

  1. Nice job, Jilly. It’s always nice when those who have stacked the deck in their own favor get their comeuppance. And at the hands (paws) of a shape shifting cat no less.

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  3. The fourth sentence hit me in the heart, and I could just cry. But it was a thrilling story of revenge, with just enough guidance from you to let my imagination run free! I am afraid this year might be a good year to be writing these revenge stories, these stories of setting the world right by any means possible.

    Thanks! I loved the chewing gum. Reminded me of the “I’m here to chew gum and kick ass, and I just ran out of chewing gum” — whatever that was.

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