Elizabeth: NaNo Progress Report – A Big Hot Mess

Cue the trumpets, toss the confetti, and raise your glass, it’s time to celebrate the rapidly approaching end of NaNo.

About an hour ago I typed my two favorite words – “The End” – and uploaded my final word count and manuscript for validation.  As a NaNo “winner”, I have the lovely graphic you see over to the left and a 50,007 word manuscript that can best be described as “a big hot mess.”

My NaNo got off to a slow start this year (I may have slept through a few writing sessions), and there have been a few days with less than stellar word counts, but being off work last week gave me a chance to really focus on writing and get a large number of words on the page that can probably best be described as “quantity” rather than “quality.”  There are most certainly plot holes you could drive a truck through, and it’s littered with notes like “something needs to happen here,” but the draft is done.


Once the excitement of finishing the draft cools, it’s time to think about what to do next.

Give it a rest

One of the best things you can do when you finish your draft can be to put it away and give it a rest.  If you’ve been head-down in your story for any length of time, it can be helpful to take a break and do something completely different.  Read a book.  Watch a movie.  Get out of those writing pajamas and actually leave the house.  Your story will still be there, marinating away in your subconscious.  One advantage to taking a break is that when you do go back to your story, time and distance will have given you a new perspective.  You are also likely to be refreshed and motivated to jump back into the story and start working on it again.

Once you are ready to get back to writing, you have some of options:

 Throw it away and start all over again

Okay, I can hear the screams of “nooooooo” from here on this one, especially if you’ve just spent the last month powering your way through 50,000 words of NaNo.  For many writers though, that first draft is more about discovering what the story is about than getting final words on the page.  It’s a chance to get to know your characters, to put them in different situations to see how they will react, and to do a walk-through of your conflict and story arc.    Once your draft is done, you may have a very different idea about your story than you had when you first started.  You may be able to revise your draft, but you may also decide that it would be easier to start from scratch, now that you really understand your story.  Even if you continue going forward with your current draft you may find yourself cutting out large portions of it.  That can hurt – who wants to see their word count drop – but the end result will be a better story, which can ease the pain a bit.

Move on

The story you’ve wound up with in your first draft may not actually be the story you want to tell, or you may decide that the idea you initially had just didn’t work out, for whatever reason.  Your best option may just be to put the draft away and get started on something new.  I follow a lot of writers on social media and have heard countless stories of unfinished drafts sitting in a drawer or stories that got off track and couldn’t be saved.  It happens.  Take whatever you’ve learned from writing the draft and move on to the next story.  Who knows, sometime down the road you may circle back to this draft story with new ideas to move it forward.

Once more from the top

On the flip-side of the coin, your first draft may be a pretty good version of the story you are trying to tell.  In that case, now is a good time to do a full read-through.  This is not an editing pass, this is a “does this flow in a reasonable way and are there any major holes in the story” read-through.  This may also be a good time to outline the story you’ve wound up with so you can see what is happening in each scene and how the story and characters are arcing.  Revisiting our old friend the conflict-box (see posts here and here for a refresher)) can be very helpful at this point.

You may be one of those writers who just needs to go through their first draft one time to tighten everything up and get it to a polished state or you may need to make several additional passes, each time focusing on some specific aspect of the story.  Whichever path you follow is the right one if it gets you to a finished story.

Once you’ve finished a first draft, the most important thing is to:

Keep up the Momentum

Along the way to your completed draft, you’ve probably figured out your writing style and/or how to fit writing into your already busy life.  Maybe you’ve established a set writing schedule or re-prioritized things so writing comes first, not last.  Whatever you’ve done to get to the finished draft stage, keep doing it.  Once you’ve got a writing routine in place, it’s much easier to keep on with it than it is to stop and restart one (voice of experience talking here).

I don’t know about you, but there is a sink full of dishes that has been waiting for me to finish my recent first draft.    I’m going to take care of that, maybe binge-watch some Hallmark Channel holiday movies, and then get back to work.  I have a daily word count to hit and some pretty massive plot-holes to patch.

Happy writing to all, regardless of what phase you are in.

10 thoughts on “Elizabeth: NaNo Progress Report – A Big Hot Mess

  1. Congratulation, Elizabeth! As someone whose writing speed must be measured in epochs, rather than days or weeks, I am in awe.

    • On the flip side Jeanne, what you’ve written is on it’s way to being released into the wild soon. What I’ve written would be best tied to a pair of cement overshoes and dropped into a big deep body of water 🙂

  2. Way to go, Elizabeth!

    I’m currently at around 28K words, which is wonderful progress for me, considering the influx of family last week (what I would have given for a week off).

    NaNo has been great in that it has given me perspective on my story. I’m at about the half-way point in it and have figured out that
    1) I need dual POV in this story (which means going back and either adding scenes in Susannah’s POV or rewriting some of the Nate ones for her),
    2) I have no idea what’s happening after the midpoint, but before the black moment (the dreaded “third quarter”), and
    3) sprinting — which is how I’ve written all 28K words — actually works for me in that I don’t get any time to think about how I’ve worded something or if it sounds great…it gets the story on paper. Not to mention that I joined a FB group of other writers I met on the cruise who are also doing NaNo and we sprint together. The camaraderie has been amazing and encouraging.

    I’ll keep writing, keep sprinting, and keep going until I also type “The End.” Again, kudos to you for a job well done!

    • Justine, 28K is nothing to sneeze at and it’s great that you’ve figured out some important things for your story, as well as found that sprinting is a good writing style for you. Good luck on your sprints to “The End”.

    • Thanks Jilly. It’s nice to have made it this far, but it’s kind of overwhelming when I look at this draft and realize how much work needs to be done and how many more words need to be added.

    • Thanks Kay. I’m especially happy that I didn’t have to resort to replacing all contractions with their associated 2-words in order to streeeeetch the word count (I may or may not have done that in the past) 🙂

      On the other hand, I’m pretty sure the most frequently used word in this draft is a tie between “something” and “maybe”. Ah well, those are things to work on tomorrow.

  3. Congratualions! That’s really great! Both of you!

    My NaNo petered out midway, but . . . better to be a three-day priest than never a priest at all, to borrow from a Japanese proverb that pokes fun at the person who keeps up a habit for only three days.

    There are so many ways to measure success — and I think going the wrong direction (especially in writing, where you aren’t really going to meet someone in a dark alley) is progress of sorts. At least you know what doesn’t work, and you may have picked up something that does.

    (-: And by “you” I mean “me”.

  4. Thanks Michaeline. Sounds like you made some good progress this month too. Definitely better to get some words on the page rather than none. Hopefully the writing and thinking you did this month will be something you can build on.

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